Showing posts with label Rob. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Rob. Show all posts

Sunday, October 7, 2007

Feedback on Term 3 Speech- Why holidays are so important

2.59 Great start with a rhetorical question. Excellent eye contact and use of voice and expression. You have obviously practised the speech because you were able to provide lots of eye contact. You gave interesting examples and details about holidays. The conclusion of the speech was superb, you tied it in to the introduction really well.

Next Steps:
Rove a little more with your eyes so that you scan the audience more. Great speech Nicky, well done.

Thursday, July 19, 2007

Feedback - blog

Your blog is developing well Nicky, your link to the T14 blog isn't right. Please fix it. Keep up the great work.
Rob