Showing posts with label feedback. Show all posts
Showing posts with label feedback. Show all posts

Monday, December 3, 2007

Why The All Blacks, Why Not France Instead?

Dear New Zealand Rugby Union.

GO THE ALL BLACKS
Hello my name is Nicky Bowler and I think the ALL BLACKS should of won the world cup. Here is some information you might want to know 55% think it was the refferee's fault 7% think it was the coach 17% was the all blacks players.

First of all the ref kept giving out penalties to the All Blacks Then there was the send off thing when they send you off for no reason THEN there’s the ford pass from the French and they score when they should of called it up for a ford pass but of course they let it go.

Most people were getting ready to leave on the plane to go and watch the finals because the knew we would get in of course the ref spoils everything and loads of people canceled there trip to Paris France to watch our champions many people were angry and disappointed that the refs were cheating but of course French won.

I think the All blacks should of won because Graham Henry may no longer be your hero but to me he always is. When the All Blacks arrived back everyone was still happy with them for getting this far well it least I am So many people turned out to Christchurch Airport for congrautulating them and getting there signatures. I think the are still my number 1 fans even if the loose a game.

So in conclusion I think the ref should pay next time the ref will suffer no So now we will be ready to win in 4 years time and we will ring the cup home were it belongs in New Zealand so I’m ready my friends are ready everybody’s ready so the ref will pay new Zealand meet the cup in 4 years.

Sincerely Nicky

Sunday, October 7, 2007

Feedback on Term 3 Speech- Why holidays are so important

2.59 Great start with a rhetorical question. Excellent eye contact and use of voice and expression. You have obviously practised the speech because you were able to provide lots of eye contact. You gave interesting examples and details about holidays. The conclusion of the speech was superb, you tied it in to the introduction really well.

Next Steps:
Rove a little more with your eyes so that you scan the audience more. Great speech Nicky, well done.

Monday, July 30, 2007

Student led conferrence

I thought your presentation was great.  It was structured and well organised, which really impressed me.  I was surprised at your confidence and how far you have come with your IT skills. It was good to see the diveristy of your work.  Thanks for sharing your work with me.
Kathryn (Nicky's mum)

Thursday, July 19, 2007

Feedback - blog

Your blog is developing well Nicky, your link to the T14 blog isn't right. Please fix it. Keep up the great work.
Rob